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FALLING

Falling from your grace
When you can't keep
Up the pace
Don't take that faithful leap

Yet you know
But you dont
God still loves you
Just hope and pray
When your falling

If you believe in him
God will catch you
And keep you
From falling into the depths

Like i said just
Hope and pray
And you wont fall
Or have to leap
©2007-2009 ~tex12
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i guess this means i still have my ability to write poems

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:iconleoslittlebride:
not all poems have to rhym...

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:iconleoslittlebride:
needs more depth

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:iconmorikage:
awwww i love it..it's perfect lol :hug: :smooch:

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..............ur so weird XD
:icontex12:
i though you would
:iconmorikage:
lol:hug: ur to much lol ur my lil angel lol :hug: :smooch:

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..............ur so weird XD
:icondeloco49:
Yayz, religous poems are awsome!

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:iconmelodysoul:
very nice, but i think leaps are important when it comes to a form of faith, any faith. This is coming of corse from the girl who has many many views on all religions so..lol. anyway its nice, it has a beat, (a flow) but i think a rymes scheme would help a little so the flow would go a bit better. It is very nice still tho kudos

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